Considering most first-time novels fall between 80, words, I think it was safe to say that I was more likely to publish a sneeze than this book. Professional authors use those things very sparingly. It is a good rule to avoid lists of adjectives but, when you have them, check to see if any should be hyphenated.
If he sent out his work out like that, it would make a terrible first impression on anyone reading it. But remember that an agent may be looking at your submission alongside 50 others. And they get full access to our How To Write course.
Cover Page rules Contact details in top left-hand corner. Use single quotation marks for dialogue.
Then, put the article down and paraphrase in your own words, with true feeling and energy, that which you have just read.